Attempt at poetry :-))

I knew for sure that poetry is not my cup of tea but when the muse is near anything is possible.
Hence, I made a lame attempt at poetry and here it is :-

In the matters of love,
Eyes talk and hearts listen,
Words can't fit the meanings of love,
These gestures are conveyed by eyes,
And understood by hearts.

--Oblivion

You can laugh and also let me know.
At least a blog entry after a long long time -- I'm back :-)))

My dear readers ( read friends ), :-))
If you wanted blogging to be more interactive what would you want to see on your blog page, any ideas or comments are acceptable.

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pradeep said…
I think If you remove those commas and change it to a normal font and reduce its size..Its nothing but a normal sentenece..where is the poetry there??

~Pradeep Reddy
oblivion said…
thats what poetry is - make grammatically incorrect sentences, try to combine them some how and at end get some how the meaning.
Well, i said the beginning itself that is a lame attempt. its such for fun. But your point is well taken buddy.
Purpose is not just to make fun of myself but also get ideas from ppl to know how we can make bloggin more interactive. what are ur ideas?
Wow, some words that complement your feelings, :).I liked it.
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